Editing book and promotional materials for Kelly Tanabe, Super College, LLC, author, eight books.
"[To Ron Kenner] We were very pleased with the edit. You tightened it a bit [as requested to fit promitional layout] and yet managed to keep the same tone and voice."
Kelly Tanabe, author
Brief sample edit:
Before edit: Walt Disney is cryogenically frozen and awaiting the day that medical science can survive him. A Neiman Marcus customer who was tricked into paying $250 for a cookie recipe is sharing the department store's prized recipe with the world as retribution. While these stories are fun to relate, what they share in common is that they are urban legends.
After RKedit: Walt Disney is cryogenically frozen and awaits revival by medical science. A Neiman-Marcus customer who was tricked into paying $250 for a cookie recipe takes revenge by sharing the department store's prized recipe with the world. These stories are fun, but are urban legends.
Years back Ron Kenner won a special John Swett award, one of only a few awarded each year by the California Teachers Association. He has received other awards and local and national recognition for his writings on education and urban affairs.
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